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Smooch take 2

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The mini story has changed a wee bit. ;) :D I'll put up the beginning part, just because I feel like it. Near the end is where it changes, as you can see in the animation.

Aelita opened the door and glanced inside of the room. She cocked her head to the side at the sight of the blonde boy, sitting at his computer. He turned around, a bit surprised at seeing the pink clad girl.

"Oh, hi Aelita," he smiled at her.

"What are you doing in here?" the girl asked, stepping inside and closing the door behind her. "I didn't see you down at breakfast."

"I'm not really that hungry," Jeremie replied, turning back to his computer.

"But it's Sunday!" the girl exclaimed, throwing her arms up for a moment before dropping them again. "You should be outside with us. What are you doing?"

"I'm trying to find a way so you're safer on Lyoko."

"Me?" Aelita's eyes widened. "Just me?"

Jeremies eyes shot open wide and his face flushed at his mistake. "No! I mean- yes! I-I meant... By 'you' I meant ALL of you!" He quickly grabbed for a data sheet and hunched over it, checking for mistakes so he wouldn't have to look her in the eyes. Aelita stood there for a moment, surprised. Gradually, she began to smile, a small blush appearing on her cheeks.

Oh, you're so sweet! she thought to herself about him. Before she realized what she was doing, she leaned down to give him a kiss. What she didn't realize, though, since her eyes were closed, was that Jeremie had sighed and started to turn toward her, wanting to give an excuse for his strange behavior.

In one shocking moment, their lips locked.

Both of their eyes shot open very wide, staring at each other for a second before they practically flew away from each other, their faces becoming very red. Unbeknownst to each other, they were both smiling, though.

End of take 2 :aww: I hope you enjoyed.

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I forgot to say.... For one frame, and one frame alone, Jeremie's glasses are gone. It's pretty easy to see where. I hadn't noticed this until I had it completely scanned. I was too lazy to rescan the frame.
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